Goosebumps (Summary of story)
Today is the starting of the story and in the story there are many characters in the story.
In the story I and mine little brother Denny have come to visit the musiuem with our parents.
I have lost my little brother Denny in the museum, Denny is in the experiment lab of white haired man and there are many kinds of invention's are in the laboratory.
Time machine is also there and Denny have used that time machine with help of that white haired man because he is testing his time machine.
So we don't know that Denny is in future or past let's see what will happen next.
You wrote it well. However, you wrote in the story two three times, you've written mine brother instead of my brother and check the spelling of museum.
ReplyDeleteOk Thanks Nabila I will improve it.
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